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Lady clad in velvet smooth-
Rose and candle in her hand...
Through the beautiful nightlight,
She wanders into well-known land.
Pale as the wax that her hand grips,
Gorgeous maiden rushed like the wind-
For she saw her beloved one sitting
On his very own marble bed.
Translucent entity breathed her name
As the waltz of the sorrow went on-
Their love again became a shadow game.
Last drops of moonlight fell from Heavens-
Kissing the beauty goodbye, he went
And disappeared into another sleepless night.
Rose and candle in her hand...
Through the beautiful nightlight,
She wanders into well-known land.
Pale as the wax that her hand grips,
Gorgeous maiden rushed like the wind-
For she saw her beloved one sitting
On his very own marble bed.
Translucent entity breathed her name
As the waltz of the sorrow went on-
Their love again became a shadow game.
Last drops of moonlight fell from Heavens-
Kissing the beauty goodbye, he went
And disappeared into another sleepless night.
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Lovely little poem for the challenge: 
Even though the theme was to make something spooky, I never found ghosts or spirits spooky - rather sad. For ghosts are merely poor beings that are trapped between worlds, never allowed to leave or stay.
Therefore, here is a little sonnet of a maiden and her deceased loved one
Please do let me know what you think
And as always:
Love,
SoLo~
Challenge #37- Ghost StoryHello everyone and welcome to our 37th Challenge!
As we begin October the air is starting to chill and Halloween approaches.
Craving spine-tingling words, we are introducing a LITERATURE Challenge- Write us a Ghost Story!
These challenges are all about inspiring our members to create art. In that spirit we ask that you only submit NEW works created just for this challenge. Only literature will be accepted for this challenge- poetry or prose- your choice. Go crazy, get creative and SPOOKY.
Here's how it will work:
-leave us a comment in this journal with a link to your creation.
-mention this challenge in the description of your deviation.
-the deadline is October 30th 2017.
We will pick two deviations to be featured in our 'Best Of' folder along with 50 points each.
Any questions? Interested in donating prizes? (we could use them!) Comment here or note the group.
Get Inspired. Create. Have fun! SCARE US.
Even though the theme was to make something spooky, I never found ghosts or spirits spooky - rather sad. For ghosts are merely poor beings that are trapped between worlds, never allowed to leave or stay.
Therefore, here is a little sonnet of a maiden and her deceased loved one
Please do let me know what you think
And as always:
Love,
SoLo~
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I love how you view ghosts. It's so easy to write them as scary, but maybe they're the ones who are scared. 